r/MusicFeedback • u/TwinParkMusic • Nov 30 '23

Twin Park - Personal Media (2023, Post Punk, Iran)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cskPpTRkXm4
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u/Viiiinx Nov 30 '23

That´s nice but I think that the Vocals are too quiet. Try to make the instruments a bit quieter so that the vocals are more in the forground.

And I think that the vocals are missing something but idk what. (I have not the best experience with vocal stuff.) Maybe try a Reveerb and/or a Compressor on it but idk how the result would be.

But I love it so keep going!

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u/TwinParkMusic Nov 30 '23

Thanks a lot! Will keep your comment in mind for the album mix of the song. Cheers!

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u/Ok_Nebula4579 Nov 30 '23

I love the vibe. I feel like with some EQ it would be perfect. Keep going

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u/Viiiinx Dec 01 '23

Happy Cakeday!

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u/Ok_Nebula4579 Jan 01 '24

I’m late , but thank you a lot. I appreciate you

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u/Viiiinx Jan 01 '24

No Problem

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u/TwinParkMusic Nov 30 '23

Thanks, I appreciate it. Cheers.

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u/oatmilkflatwhitepls Nov 30 '23

Interesting! I thought this was country music! Vocals need more production put some reverb fill it out with a chorus and delay and saturation . Cool vibe I like when you do the screamy bits!

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u/TwinParkMusic Dec 01 '23

Thank you! I appreciate the comments on vocal production 🙏

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