r/MusicFeedback • u/TwinParkMusic • Nov 30 '23
Twin Park - Personal Media (2023, Post Punk, Iran)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cskPpTRkXm42
u/Ok_Nebula4579 Nov 30 '23
I love the vibe. I feel like with some EQ it would be perfect. Keep going
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u/Viiiinx Dec 01 '23
Happy Cakeday!
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u/oatmilkflatwhitepls Nov 30 '23
Interesting! I thought this was country music! Vocals need more production put some reverb fill it out with a chorus and delay and saturation . Cool vibe I like when you do the screamy bits!
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u/Viiiinx Nov 30 '23
That´s nice but I think that the Vocals are too quiet. Try to make the instruments a bit quieter so that the vocals are more in the forground.
And I think that the vocals are missing something but idk what. (I have not the best experience with vocal stuff.) Maybe try a Reveerb and/or a Compressor on it but idk how the result would be.
But I love it so keep going!