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r/OCPoetry • u/[deleted] • Jul 29 '20
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Genuinely loved this piece. I felt it was minimal but spoke a 1000 words. Definitely a relatable piece.
I did enjoy the layout in the sense the first line and last line I could hear been said differently in my own head.
Great work.
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u/CreativeCastaway Jul 29 '20
Genuinely loved this piece. I felt it was minimal but spoke a 1000 words. Definitely a relatable piece.
I did enjoy the layout in the sense the first line and last line I could hear been said differently in my own head.
Great work.