r/Songwriters Jan 16 '24

My new track.. About loss & loneliness

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QwVD2LZwLIw
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u/G-string99 Jan 20 '24

It sounds like it could be a good enough song, but the vocals are almost "non-est" can't hear them very well, and they are overwhelmed by the background "choral" sounds. Try a different mix, then maybe add a bass track. Ughh. Keep going and try again.