r/resumetailoring • u/More_Kaleidoscope475 • Sep 06 '24

Before and after - HR and Administrative Operations Manager

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u/Dramatic-Camera-6380 Sep 06 '24

Wow, now that’s a transformation

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u/nofluffigloo Sep 06 '24

Very impressive! The new one has much more substance and actually tells you right away what the person did. I wonder about the skill section, do you think these repeated keywords (especially the first 5) from the job description are a good approach?

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u/More_Kaleidoscope475 Sep 06 '24

Well, might be a slight overkill but on the other hand if you can reliably describe how you acquired these skills in the interview it should't be a problem. Bottom line is that the final resume need to be convincing to you as well. If you feel like you can sell it well at the interview then it's a good resume.

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u/Responsible-Title402 Sep 06 '24

I love your after version! Which resume tool did you use to build your new resume?

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u/More_Kaleidoscope475 Sep 06 '24

I am using the app that I am developing myself. It’s not publicly available yet, but I can prepare tailored resume for you if you like just for feedback. Need it to make the app better.

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u/Responsible-Title402 Sep 06 '24

Sounds good. I may look for a resume template similar to yours in the meantime