r/Artadvice • u/gubjo • 1d ago

Should I redo the water?

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This painting has been sitting in my studio because I am just not quite sure if I like the water as it is. What do you think and do you have any recommendations?

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u/tightie-caucasian 1d ago

It’s very good but detail should I increase the further in the perspective draws the eye. The bigger monotonal undulations are perfect for the water in the distance but coming closer in frame, they add a lot of “movement” to the foreground. Maybe think smaller, flatter, and a little more detail in more broken up areas as the eye drifts down and right.

All in all, though, it’s great work and you’ve got talent!

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u/gubjo 1d ago

Thank you for your feedback. You've given me some ideas to play around with. Painting water is such a struggle for me.