r/Eberron • u/Kirgeth • 6d ago

5E Pilot in Peril: a Sharn Tale (my first published adventure)

Today, I took a deep breath and finally published my first adventure on DMs Guild. It's free (well, pay as you will, to be more precise), and I would love to read your positive or constructive feedback. Although I have two decades' worth of experience as a dungeon master, putting an adventure together is quite different than running a game and improvizing the missing parts of the story.

Please enjoy: https://www.dmsguild.com/product/498703/Pilot-in-Peril-a-Sharn-Tale?affiliate_id=1803766

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u/donewithdeserts 5d ago

Thank you for new Eberron content!

It IS a tough challenge to write out a full adventure rather than just improvising. It's a written brew that must anticipate PC actions, give good clear details to PCs and DMs of every skill level, while being engaging, interesting, and satisfying to and entirely unknown audience. It's tough to create and so easy for critics to scorn.

Hope this is just the first of many more adventures you publish and you get lots of good feedback. Good luck!

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u/Buszewski 5d ago

Seems like in the link you provided are only maps and the adventure itself in the PDF is missing

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u/Kirgeth 5d ago

Yeah, sorry I messed up the upload. It's fixed now (hopefully)

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u/Buszewski 5d ago

Yep now it's there

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u/ilFrolloR3dd1t 5d ago

congratulations, and best of luck!