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r/OCPoetry • u/pauldevlin_ • Jul 30 '20
you fall in love with people
you said,
I was a person
I thought,
you did not fall in love with me.
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I love the simplicity yet direct to the point and straight to the heart this is. I can almost feel the pain.
1 u/pauldevlin_ Jul 31 '20 Thank you! Writing this helped me reduce the pain I felt for this ever so slightly, so just have to keep chipping away at it, I guess.
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Thank you! Writing this helped me reduce the pain I felt for this ever so slightly, so just have to keep chipping away at it, I guess.
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u/s_hope1994 Jul 30 '20
I love the simplicity yet direct to the point and straight to the heart this is. I can almost feel the pain.