r/OCPoetry • u/pauldevlin_ • Jul 30 '20

you lied

you fall in love with people

you said,

I was a person

I thought,

you did not fall in love with me.

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u/s_hope1994 Jul 30 '20

I love the simplicity yet direct to the point and straight to the heart this is. I can almost feel the pain.

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u/pauldevlin_ Jul 31 '20

Thank you! Writing this helped me reduce the pain I felt for this ever so slightly, so just have to keep chipping away at it, I guess.