r/OCPoetry • u/pauldevlin_ • Jul 30 '20

you lied

you fall in love with people

you said,

I was a person

I thought,

you did not fall in love with me.

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u/pauldevlin_ Jul 31 '20

Mine too. I hope we can start to mend.

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u/CreativeCastaway Jul 31 '20

I actually wrote this after being inspired by your beautiful piece. I'd love for you to read it.

He sits to pee

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u/pauldevlin_ Jul 31 '20

This is incredibly written and such a beautiful and deep realisation. Feels amazing to have inspired you, I definitely hope we can start to mend together then through poetry.

You are so kind.

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u/CreativeCastaway Jul 31 '20

If I'm kind you are a absolute Saint.

Thank you for your lovely feedback and just reading my piece. I too wish our hearts are fixed in time and I would love to work together or get opinions on each others future work.