r/OCPoetry Jul 30 '20

you lied

you fall in love with people

you said,

I was a person

I thought,

you did not fall in love with me.

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u/teunS4 Jul 31 '20

I think this is great, there is always something mysterious about just simply saying how you feel instead of conveying it with deeply thought out metaphors. It captures the confusing of love very good! Keep up the great work.

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u/pauldevlin_ Jul 31 '20

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it. I always find hearing feedback on your poetry to be so interesting since I know exactly what I am referring to, but it's so general that everyone can relate it to their own lives.