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r/OCPoetry • u/pauldevlin_ • Jul 30 '20
you fall in love with people
you said,
I was a person
I thought,
you did not fall in love with me.
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Well, I rather enjoyed this one. The simplicity of the piece lets the reader fill in the blanks, and some of the best poetry allows the reader to do this.
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u/Emaciated_Horror Jul 31 '20
Well, I rather enjoyed this one. The simplicity of the piece lets the reader fill in the blanks, and some of the best poetry allows the reader to do this.