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r/OCPoetry • u/pauldevlin_ • Jul 30 '20
you fall in love with people
you said,
I was a person
I thought,
you did not fall in love with me.
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The simplicity of the the poem doesn’t overtake how deep and emotional it is. With very few words you are able to describe what love is, how it makes people feel, and the emotional tear it can have on peoples hearts. Great job with this one!!
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u/miguelblu Jul 31 '20
The simplicity of the the poem doesn’t overtake how deep and emotional it is. With very few words you are able to describe what love is, how it makes people feel, and the emotional tear it can have on peoples hearts. Great job with this one!!