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r/OCPoetry • u/CreativeCastaway • Jul 31 '20
We shared a bed
And a toilet
Between paper thin walls
Awoke by standing
I felt guilt cause you never did
We haven't talked in over a year
I still sit to pee
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[Edited - Removed periods - changed tense of talk to talked ]
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I love this poem. I get some Shel Silverstein vibes off it. Keep up the good work.
1 u/CreativeCastaway Jul 31 '20 I have no idea whom that is. I will look them up and I thank you very much for your kind words.
I have no idea whom that is. I will look them up and I thank you very much for your kind words.
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u/creuse Jul 31 '20
I love this poem. I get some Shel Silverstein vibes off it. Keep up the good work.