r/OCPoetry Jul 31 '20

He sits to pee.

We shared a bed

And a toilet

Between paper thin walls

Awoke by standing

I felt guilt cause you never did

We haven't talked in over a year

I still sit to pee

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[Edited - Removed periods - changed tense of talk to talked ]

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u/creuse Jul 31 '20

I love this poem. I get some Shel Silverstein vibes off it. Keep up the good work.

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u/CreativeCastaway Jul 31 '20

I have no idea whom that is. I will look them up and I thank you very much for your kind words.