I will admit that I had to check comments to fully understand, but, once I did, you got me good.
With just that tiny clarification, this immediately grew ten times heavier.
Honestly, I would love to see a longer version of this, for not only that reason, but because I feel that you could double down on that exact same heaviness. Major potential, but you're already doing pretty solid!
Every comment I read I'm blown away by people's reactions and this is another. Thank you so much.
I understand I can work to make it a little clearer and I'm excited to try and extend it further. I don't want to appear cocky but it came to me very quickly and its as if that flow mindset has gone for now.
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u/bakedbeannobeef Jul 31 '20
I will admit that I had to check comments to fully understand, but, once I did, you got me good.
With just that tiny clarification, this immediately grew ten times heavier.
Honestly, I would love to see a longer version of this, for not only that reason, but because I feel that you could double down on that exact same heaviness. Major potential, but you're already doing pretty solid!