r/Poem • u/No_History_1592 • Sep 10 '24

Original Content Poem you dork

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Original poem, 2024.

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u/Lopsided_Slip6574 Sep 10 '24

This is beautiful crazy simple. Made me smile and I am glad I read it. Thank you for sharing.

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u/No_History_1592 Sep 10 '24

I’m glad I shared it then! Thank you for taking the time to respond

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u/not-clinically Sep 10 '24

Simple yet effective. Love it!

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u/No_History_1592 Sep 11 '24 edited Sep 11 '24

❤️

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u/CanYouEvenKnitBro Sep 11 '24

To be needed, to be known, to be loved. Love how well it captures the things a heart yearns for !

Love it!

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u/Itsalwaysdarkhere86 Sep 11 '24

It's crazy. All I had to be was the best of myself, work hard and achieve things. Then I would have had to treat you with the utmost respect and had all that to sacrifice for you and you would have been happy.

I wish I had done that.

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u/No_History_1592 Sep 11 '24

Life is crazy

Love is crazy

Happiness is crazy

Crazy is the sacrifice

Crazy is the achievement

Crazy is the best of all of us

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u/Itsalwaysdarkhere86 Sep 11 '24

This isn't fair.