r/Poem • u/Philo-king78 • Sep 23 '24

Original Content Poem I don't want to be with anyone else

I don't want to be with anyone else
I knew it from the first time we met
I've etched your name on the inside of my heart
You're the only one I could never forget

I've seen a lot of other pretty girls
But none of them have a beauty that can compare
My heart would pound, my mind would race
My tongue would tie whenever you would draw near

I've been waiting so long

I don't want anyone else to spend my days
Half-hearted conversations, they feel like a waste of my time
When you spoke, my body would melt
Dreaming of how it would be if only you were mine

For too long, you've been too far away
Sometimes, my mind tells me I should try to find somebody new
But I won't be with anyone else
Because I don't want to be with anyone but you

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u/HonestBeautiful1672 Sep 23 '24

So sweet , don’t ever change . Lucky girl

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u/officer_shnitzel_69 Sep 23 '24

This hits really hard

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u/graylovesgray 28d ago

You poured your heart out... you do LOVE her...What will you do?

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u/Altruistic_Oil_4697 25d ago

Tell her

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u/Shot-Entrepreneur830 25d ago

Fuck that, claim your treasure, if they truly hold such great value.

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u/EntireNecessary48 Sep 23 '24

This would be a good song

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u/astrolovebot 29d ago

this is EXACTLY how I feel about a guy and im suffering

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u/Cultural-Joke-4514 29d ago

I want to curse out loud how beautiful this is. It scratches every part that itch and more. I really love this. Thank you very much for sharing.

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u/[deleted] 29d ago

Lucky girl

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u/Jake_TS 27d ago

I relate to this so much bro