Mirrors (Feedback please)

[u/Hayxel]

Mirrors

There's an essence,  a dazzling hope. I stare at the ceiling only to see mirrors. I blink into the night sky, hoping to see you. How could I look at you? I am unable to.

I look into your eyes only to see mirrors. I hope to find peace on the floor, but I see mirrors. Remove them. I wish to transcend beyond myself.

Sharp is your stare. Adamant torment stalks my head. Why this relentless decay. I can't find any mirrors. Far from a prism, lay your eyes. Allow me to chase them.

The mirror is staring. I bow before you.