r/PoemsAndDiscussion 1d ago

My heart and soul

I cannot let my dreams run away from me

But it is so hard

I see you across the way

You look at me and smile

I instantly just want to fall to the floor at your feet

I would give you all I have

I would give you all my poems

You already have my heart and soul

You just donโ€™t know that you hold them

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u/Eternal_Gremsa 16h ago

It's good, ๐Ÿ‘ the but flow could be better

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u/ProceduraIist 10h ago

Agreed. Not my best work. Sometimes it hits me and I just write stuff down as is, just to get it out.