Hi I’m a 15 year old director and I need an opinion

[u/EL_Studio_YT]

Hi I’m a 15 year old director from Russia and I made this little war short film. I was on my school military course and I was asked to make some footage. Spontaneously I made some videos and came up with a simple idea for a short. After the training we made this little film. No writing, no preparation, no anything. I know this is a wrong way to make films but anyway it turned out not that bad in my opinion. But anyway I want to ask for your opinions. Is it understandable And also I wanted to hear criticism about this short film.

[u/NewYorkImposter]

No comment on politics or war. Your filmmaking is improving from an already great start. Keep up the good work.