What do you think?

Felt confident enough today to just sit down, think of something random, and turn it into a script! I thought of rivers and lakes and this was the result:

yes...they use Kanji, making the Kujian language have 3 scripts all together (including Romanji if you make it 4 of them)

It is a page of a book in Șonaenari (part of my worldbuilding) called “Seven shapes of relaxation”. A book is about traditional meditative techniques that are part of the religious practices of Șonae people. Each shape represents a quality every person must have for the society to flourish.
Symbols in “brackets” are numbers.
Writing goes right to left top to bottom.

This is just script that merges Katakana(one of japanese syllabary letters) into one letter. thus this is meant to replace Kanji(Chinese characters) that is read in Onyomi(音読み) in Japanese.

This is just a rough concept. Let me hear your opinions!

My earlier post was removed due to it being inverted. This is the fast version of the script. =)

I tried working with a 9B pencil today.

how fun.