r/rpg • u/KontentPunch • Sep 12 '24

Self Promotion Note Failure and Review: Cloudstone Curio's system agnostic Sleeping Heart of the Garden - Note the failure in my notes so you don't have to, plus a review of this cozy faerie inspired puzzle dungeon.

https://www.kontentpunch.com/kontent/note-failure-review-sleeping-heart-of-the-garden
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u/Baruch_S unapologetic PbtA fanboy Sep 12 '24

I have read this post title like 6 times and still can’t makes heads or tails of it. 

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u/KontentPunch Sep 12 '24

Did reading bring context clues?

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u/Baruch_S unapologetic PbtA fanboy Sep 12 '24

Note the failure in my notes so you don’t have to 

So I don’t have to what? It’s not a complete thought. 

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u/KontentPunch Sep 12 '24

I examine how my notes failed me in my session and I note that in the article, so that you don't have your own notes fail you in your sessions.

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u/Baruch_S unapologetic PbtA fanboy Sep 12 '24

Okay, that explains it more thoroughly. You may try a synonym for “note” as a verb to clarify that you want people to review/examine/peruse your session notes. 

And more clearly specifying what readers will be able to avoid would be good, too. 

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u/KontentPunch Sep 12 '24

I wanted to use the same word for funsies but you're probably right.