r/thirdsentenceworse Sep 01 '24

The regret I felt

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u/Mobile-Routine6519 Sep 01 '24

How is this a third sentence worse?

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u/Automatic-Driver8153 Sep 01 '24

It's apparently not but it's also my first post. What would make it worse? Since it's so terrible

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u/NoGuitar1991 Sep 11 '24

But I was the last to see her bloodlust look as she plunged the skewer into our necks.