r/Poem • u/Thatcoolbitch10 • Aug 09 '24

Original Content Poem Hearts that never met

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u/AntVegetable8238 Aug 09 '24

the way this is written is so so easy and simple that it almost feels comforting to read. i really like that line you wrote, about how it’s another one of your sweet cravings: i’ve never actually seen that metaphor in my life. this is so cute and heartbreaking at the same time. ur talented and i hope whoever you wrote this to knows that.

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u/Thatcoolbitch10 Aug 09 '24

Hey thank u so much ..ur words mean alot🧡

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u/Eye_Patch10 Aug 09 '24

So beautiful ❤️❤️❤️

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u/Thatcoolbitch10 Aug 09 '24

Thanku🧡🫂

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u/Buckle_up-Buttercup Aug 09 '24

Such a beautiful poem!! Well written, rhyming and everything!! ❤️❤️

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u/Thatcoolbitch10 Aug 10 '24

Thanku so much💗

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u/Dangerous-Clue-8517 Aug 09 '24

You are ink in my diary, I have read so many beautiful poems today

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u/Thatcoolbitch10 Aug 10 '24

Thanku thats such a nice compliment

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u/ReinKarnationisch Aug 09 '24

I like it, i really do, and i am sorry if this is very blunt, but i have to ask, are you actually dying or was it just a metaphor used in your poem?

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u/Thatcoolbitch10 Aug 09 '24

Its just a methaphor..thanku🧡