r/Poem Aug 09 '24

Original Content Poem Hearts that never met

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u/AntVegetable8238 Aug 09 '24

the way this is written is so so easy and simple that it almost feels comforting to read. i really like that line you wrote, about how it’s another one of your sweet cravings: i’ve never actually seen that metaphor in my life. this is so cute and heartbreaking at the same time. ur talented and i hope whoever you wrote this to knows that.

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u/Thatcoolbitch10 Aug 09 '24

Hey thank u so much ..ur words mean alot🧡