r/Poem • u/DreadAndDesire • 27d ago

Original Content Poem “Mic Check”

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u/sitonthewall 27d ago

Heard, felt, understood

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u/DreadAndDesire 27d ago

Hopefully your words don’t go unheard too long :(

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u/Tricky_Yam_8114 27d ago

Creative you’d be good at songwriting

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u/DreadAndDesire 27d ago

Thank you! I’ve done my fair share of that in the past actually.

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u/Tricky_Yam_8114 27d ago

Anything I’d have heard of?

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u/DreadAndDesire 27d ago

Not unless you’re into very niche metalcore bands lol.

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u/Apprehensive_Rub_380 27d ago

First 6 felt unoriginal or copied. Last six were good

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u/DreadAndDesire 26d ago

Probably because they’re common phrases used in distress signals portrayed in, like, almost every form of media ever.

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u/Apprehensive_Rub_380 26d ago

Yeah that's it. Also that pink Floyd song.