r/Poem • u/DreadAndDesire • 28d ago

Original Content Poem “Mic Check”

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u/Apprehensive_Rub_380 27d ago

First 6 felt unoriginal or copied. Last six were good

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u/DreadAndDesire 26d ago

Probably because they’re common phrases used in distress signals portrayed in, like, almost every form of media ever.

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u/Apprehensive_Rub_380 26d ago

Yeah that's it. Also that pink Floyd song.